by Lorryn Mar 27, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You look at me across the room, |
by Lorryn
No its meant to be like that, if you look the rhyme scheme goes ABAB AABB ABAB AABCB, but its your opinion and thats what im after, so thankyou. |
This was an okay piece, I think. Towards the end it got a little messy, and the rhymes disappeared. The rhyme scheme throughout was a little, messy, weird, confused, or maybe that's just me. I liked the idea/story though. |