by Krathia
Strong opening. It's been a while since I last read a poem that starts so boldly. |
by noha
Good work ally but i like the 3rd stanze its more strong and powerful but all of it got the meaning and the feeling, well done 5/5 |
by Syn
Although i like how this is written. i completely disagree with the use of immortal. but i suppose we stand in two different places. |
by Bugg
Another good poem! I liked the meaning of this poem. It was a really great read. |
by Love vs Fate
Wow this poem has a lot of emotional and passion in it. You chose these words that painted this wonderful image for me. You did a spectacular job on this poem! keep it up girl I will enjoy reading your other poems. |
Aly- |
Great jobb. i love the title. such great emotion. 5/5 keep it up!! |
by william
Its great!!!!!!!!!! |
by Britt
Superr bold totally power-riffic! well donee |
Wow you are tough! lolz |
by Angel Eyes
Wow great poem!! |
Wow, this is a really good poem... It reminds me of a certain, ficticious relationship, between a certain vampire and a certain human ... :D |