An Abused Little Girl

by Chelsey   Mar 28, 2008


They'll Never Know.
What She'll Never Tell.
It'll Never Slip Her Lips.
You'll Just Think She Fell.

You'll See Her One Day
All Bruised From Head To Toe
You'll Ask If He Hit You.
She'll Just Bow Her Head And Say No.

She Knows Everyone Knows
The Truth That She Hides
She Just Hopes That One Day
Their Worries Will Subside.

Its Not Their Fault This Happens.
There's No Reason They Should Care.
There's No Reason They Should Know
There's No Reason She Should Share.

She Knows They Only Want To Help
But For Her, Asking For Advice
Is The Hardest Thing She Would Ever Do
It'd Be Her Biggest Sacrafice.

She Manages To Keep Quiet
Only Telling A Few
Though Thats A Strugge For Her
These Feelings Are So New.

She's Told A Couple People
They Want It All To Unfurl
But Its All To New
For An Abused Little Girl.

Guys, Tell Me What You Think About It. Any Feedback Would Be Great.
I'm Not Sure If I Like It. But I Thought I'd See What Other People Thought Before I Just Threw It Away.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bernice

    5/5 excellent work well written keep up the great work well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is very a heartrending piece. It touches the heart intensely. Very affecting and emotional. Good work. Keep writing!

    ^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hey hun. Long time no talk... :/
    I see you still write great poetry. You never were one to disappoint.
    The flow was smooth and the emotions were heartbreaking. You did a phenominal job. (:

    One mistake though::
    "She Manages To Keep Quite"
    - 'quite' should be quiet. (:

    Overall: 5.5
    - Steph. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think its excellent, i really do. i relate to it alot and its been very well written please dont throw it ok??

    write more xxxx good job xxxxxxx

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