I think its excellent, i really do. i relate to it alot and its been very well written please dont throw it ok??

write more xxxx good job xxxxxxx

Hey hun. Long time no talk... :/
I see you still write great poetry. You never were one to disappoint.
The flow was smooth and the emotions were heartbreaking. You did a phenominal job. (:

One mistake though::
"She Manages To Keep Quite"
- 'quite' should be quiet. (:

Overall: 5.5
- Steph. xx

This is very a heartrending piece. It touches the heart intensely. Very affecting and emotional. Good work. Keep writing!

^_^ 5/5

5/5 excellent work well written keep up the great work well done