I can feel your pain

by more den just a broken smile   Mar 28, 2008


I can feel the pain your going threw
i have been there myself
trying to get threw it without any help
falling apart, bleeding inside
feeling like apart of u just died
so u hide away from the world
curled up in all the promises no-one ever keeps
so you sit there in your corner and weep, weep, weep.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kitty

    I realli like this poem. It is short and simple, getting straight to the point. Th title is true too, if you feel that of which you explained than yes you can feel my pain, and many others i am sure. as for this line:
    "curled up in all the promises no-one ever keeps "
    You couldnt have said a truer word, or sentence.
    keep up the good work :)
    Kitty

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