This is really good for some random feelings! lol.

look fine i try to show you you dont see the sign
the end is near
so is the fear
the end insight
all ends... tonight

^ i really liked these lines. however, the first one i would split in half so that it doesn't interrupt the flow. however..i like "the end is near, so is the fear" it's just a really great set of lines. it flows superbly.

wonderful job.. ^.^