Comments : Lose Control

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    I liked it
    keep up the good work
    -nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by StuPiD FrEaK

    Me too! I don't wanna be stuck in captivity! No never! Hehe.. Really nice poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Loved the last line, awsome poem