Comments : Thank You

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "I thank the day, I met you
    For you were a dream came true
    Thank you for the beautiful friendship
    You've been shared
    Co'z it means so much to me
    Your kindness and understanding
    And for you do gentle love ways you
    gave in so free"

    I can relate to this and many others can as well. Good work with this as your opening stanza.

    "Thank you for holding me tightly
    When I was grasping in the dark
    And for the time
    That I need to cry"

    So sweet, and perfect imagery.

    "Thank you, for always smiling
    When I could not smile at all
    Thank you, for putting back the confidence
    The times that I felt so small"

    This stanza flowed very well.

    "Can�t be compared"

    You must have made a spelling error here that made it do this.

    Over all great poem. It really is a thankful poem and I like it.