"so you'll see it at once when we arrive,
the nation in standing, hands up for his big knife,
do you believe that he actually cares,
or do you believe that he'll actually shed tears?

in the war, back to back, put your soul in to gear to please a cold machinery. take a fork, take knife and dissect the people that love the problem free. put on a tie and hat, squeeze your ideas really flat, make this a perfect scenery. paint it black, paint it white, paint it just out of spite to get a cold machinery. "

Hey man, I really love this poem of yours. It is inspiring. I love the feelings I got from it. I totally with you about your ideas... Great job! XXX

WOW. This is really good, it's deep meaningful and makes you want to read it again and again to all you can out of it...

'thank God for all the families who can't cry.
I got fifteen men fighting, not one feels fear.
thank God for all the enemies who must die.
I took fifteen lives, but you can't see a tear.'

Those are some of the most powerful lines I have ever read. Really good job..

Just make sure you don't leave out words! 'a' is missing sometimes and 'the' should probably go before 'blind'.

Really excellent job though!

Excellent poem love :)