Glass Dolly

by StandStill   Mar 28, 2008


A little glass dolly
pretty as can be
Rosy cheeked and blonde haired
eyes as blue as the sea

what a pretty little dolly
her face is carefully set
she smiles a pretty smile
many compliments she gets

this little glass dolly
she's so hollow inside
there's nothing but air in there
no secrets does she hide

and what a pretty thing
every girl should aspire to be
a pretty glass dolly
with eyes blue like the sea

she sits on a shelf
way up high
next to a window where
in comes the sunlight from the sky

so precariously balanced
but she looks oh so secure
just another antique
resting by a china bowl for sugar

and in comes the running feet
of such an immature boy
he comes crashing by and she
comes crashing down, the breakable toy

lying in a pile of ruins
such a broken little mess
the boy hides her away
this dastardly deed he won't confess

he won't set her free
and so she must collect dust
poor broken little dolly
red lips begin to rust

such a sad ending
to such a promising start
and one has to wonder,
when she fell, did the dolly break her heart?

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, this i like my fav. poem ever! it just explains how much a boy crushes a girl so well in in such a sybolic way. 5/5!
    xoxo
    ~me~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Gabby!!! Oh my, doll. This poem was just absolutely incrediable. I saw the title and knew I had to read it, but oh my gosh.. I never expected it to be so creative, so out of the ordinary. I could just picture what the doll looked like inside my head and everything else that took place in the poem. You're right, the ending did have a twist of it's own. The beautiful doll was broken and it had a very sad ending.

    and in comes the running feet
    of such an immature boy
    he comes crashing by and she
    comes crashing down, the breakable toy

    I have to say, that was my favorite stanza. Everything made perfect sense and you never lost me once the entire time. It had a great flow and your vocabulary was just so creative. Great job, darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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