Gabby!!! Oh my, doll. This poem was just absolutely incrediable. I saw the title and knew I had to read it, but oh my gosh.. I never expected it to be so creative, so out of the ordinary. I could just picture what the doll looked like inside my head and everything else that took place in the poem. You're right, the ending did have a twist of it's own. The beautiful doll was broken and it had a very sad ending.

and in comes the running feet
of such an immature boy
he comes crashing by and she
comes crashing down, the breakable toy

I have to say, that was my favorite stanza. Everything made perfect sense and you never lost me once the entire time. It had a great flow and your vocabulary was just so creative. Great job, darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Very Good...

Wow, this i like my fav. poem ever! it just explains how much a boy crushes a girl so well in in such a sybolic way. 5/5!
xoxo
~me~