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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I'm sorry jesse...i screwed up again..i'm sorry

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Omg!!!
    thats sooo....i dont know. wow.
    excellent,
    wow.
    good job and keep this up, thats really powerful writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, amazing poem. it sent shivers down my spine. but wat's going on? pm me soon. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by Haleigh

    Wow this poem was fantastic. if this was about me it would be a reall tear jerker. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    This poem had me in tears..Aww the pain & emotion was so real to me..I feel like I could feel it..I felt the pain..I was reminded of my own...
    This has got to be the beautifullest poem I have ever read...It just blows me away
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by missyou

    Wow This poem really made me think 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww wow, i dont know where to begin, not only does it really bring tears to your eyes its just so heart wrenching. you seemed to just make it flow so well. its like you have spent a long long time writing it but at the same time its like everything has been written in a minute without thinking. its amazing.

    so so touching and really powerful stuff. def 5/5 from me!

    keep it up xx