Excellent piece of work.. i love the way you express that...

Wow.... nice poem... i loved the last part of it... it really made me melt...:(

"good bye i whisper
i beg them to see
how each word they said
did this to me... "

nice writting...

Awww, hun, thats really sad, good work x

Great flow, rhythm, rhyme and storyline. I think the piece is full of emotion and that's truly the point of poetry, to find a way to convey your emotions to others. A really good job! 5/5 btw, your last stanza was a fav!
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