Morning

Nice work here - I liked it too. well done, bravo..

Little bird
sing your song
Sunrise
right these wrongs

^^Using a little (innocent) bird to symbolise right verses wrong is marvelous.

Morning star
shine so bright
Mr. Moon
say good night

^^Again another metaphor - leaving the dark, gloomy night to greet a fresh new morning. Great!

Glisten dew
pretty, wet
Good morning
rooster, pet
Soft breeze
i missed you so
sitting still
watch the morning grow

^^The nightmare has ended. The new day comes with renewed hope.

Well done 5/5

Michael

I love this