Comments : Morning

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Little bird
    sing your song
    Sunrise
    right these wrongs

    ^^Using a little (innocent) bird to symbolise right verses wrong is marvelous.

    Morning star
    shine so bright
    Mr. Moon
    say good night

    ^^Again another metaphor - leaving the dark, gloomy night to greet a fresh new morning. Great!

    Glisten dew
    pretty, wet
    Good morning
    rooster, pet
    Soft breeze
    i missed you so
    sitting still
    watch the morning grow

    ^^The nightmare has ended. The new day comes with renewed hope.

    Well done 5/5

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice work here - I liked it too. well done, bravo..