Crimson Tears!

by James Weatherbee   Mar 28, 2008


Crimson Tears;
run down my cheek;
like a broken tap;
they do leak;
I cant stop;
this endless pain;
In losing you;
there was no gain;
The pain I feel;
is so very great;
even if you cared;
it would be to late;
I stand in a puddle;
of my tears of red;
wishing I could;
just be dead!

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Very good poem. I can see it. hmm...maybe if you used more detail it would have been better but honestly...its great just the way it is. Keep it up.

    victoria

  • 16 years ago

    by MEGZ is wondering what to do about life

    Good poem and i really like it... more descriptive words would have helped though... you know make the reader feel what you are feeling kinda thing.... just trying to help... sorry if its to harsh.

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