Visions of Faith

Beautifully penned piece. The flow was good. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done!

I felt like I really connected with this poem. It's been a while since I've felt like I had faith. It definitely helps me think about that, and today was the first time I went to church in a long time. Glad I decided to read this one today. I had read another one of your on Friday. I'm a bit slow with my reading.

Anyways, I enjoyed this poem. The rhymes were quite catch. Good job on this one.

Beautiful piece you have here. It was filled with truth and meaning which made it enjoyable to read. Your words were inspiring and poweful. I feel like you could have said more with this but I liked how you wrote it .. what you had is just fine. Well done *5/5*

I'm a christian so this really touched my heart. There was a great message about faith in it. I'm not exactly sure what the "visions" meant, but maybe I'm just slow today. :/

The Light of truth is the only way
To the hope of a truly new day
Visions of faith and visions of Love
Visions depend on Light from above

^^ This was definitely my favorite stanza. I do think "love" and "above" are a really cliche rhyme though. [Does that make sense?]

I feel that if you could go into more detail with this it would make it a whole lot better, and maybe put some better descriptive words and metaphores in there. The overall poem was great though! :]

Great job.

Keep writing!
Cayce

This is good. Very wise and unpredictable!

The piece blended with such a wonderful tone. Great diction as well.

Great JoB~

[5/5]

Best wishes,

Sarah xx