A very good piece, I thought. It was very calming and wise. There was good usage in this piece. I think my favorite stanza was the first, and I really liked the lines;

'Believing in things we do not yet see
Has lead to greatness all through history'

Very well put, and its true, which helps, lol.

Brad

I really like. It helps that i am really religous. But it is like put faith and love into words for everyone to understand.

Visions of faith and visions of love
Visions depend on light from above
There is a blind faith there is no doubt
But that is not what true faith is about

This stanza for me was a good way to start your poem.
It really told the reader what was going on and didn't leave them confused.

The faith that is never far from love
Is the faith that I hope I may speak of
Believing in things we do not yet see
Has lead to greatness all through history

The last line was a bit off but not by a lot. I wish you would have used punctuation but it's your choice. for me it just helps the reader understand how to read it.

Visions of the mind may have an earthly goal
Heartfelt visions may reach the spiritual soul
There is on this earth a certain end
Yet through the Holy Spirit we may ascend

with the last line i was a bit confused. But i'm only 15 it might not have anything to do with the poem haha.

with the last stanza I liked how it was the same as the first you dont really notice it while reading like some other poems might feel that way nice job awesome poem
5/5

This is good. Very wise and unpredictable!

The piece blended with such a wonderful tone. Great diction as well.

Great JoB~

[5/5]

Best wishes,

Sarah xx

I'm a christian so this really touched my heart. There was a great message about faith in it. I'm not exactly sure what the "visions" meant, but maybe I'm just slow today. :/

The Light of truth is the only way
To the hope of a truly new day
Visions of faith and visions of Love
Visions depend on Light from above

^^ This was definitely my favorite stanza. I do think "love" and "above" are a really cliche rhyme though. [Does that make sense?]

I feel that if you could go into more detail with this it would make it a whole lot better, and maybe put some better descriptive words and metaphores in there. The overall poem was great though! :]

Great job.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Beautiful piece you have here. It was filled with truth and meaning which made it enjoyable to read. Your words were inspiring and poweful. I feel like you could have said more with this but I liked how you wrote it .. what you had is just fine. Well done *5/5*

I felt like I really connected with this poem. It's been a while since I've felt like I had faith. It definitely helps me think about that, and today was the first time I went to church in a long time. Glad I decided to read this one today. I had read another one of your on Friday. I'm a bit slow with my reading.

Anyways, I enjoyed this poem. The rhymes were quite catch. Good job on this one.

Beautifully penned piece. The flow was good. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done!