Very beautiful poem.

5/5

Hi... I enjoyed reading your poem. This one flows so very well and I liked the styel of the writing too... Keep writing... :)

Hey...well the poem is good....sincerity in words...though there could be a few things that could be done to correct a few mistakes and get the message across through the poem in a better way...well good try though..
you r a budding writer you can surely keep writing and do much better!
luv
Pooja