Wow. I very rarely give out 5/5s (I don't know if you know this), but this was brilliant. I almost gave it a 4/5, but I thought you really deserved the 5/5. |
by alexis
It was very good, but I want to know if it happened to you or a loved one? |
Brill poem 5/5 |
by Shinobi
This poem is unique. You used two or three words a line and wrote the whole piece as one stanza. This shows that the character in this poem is in a state of conusion. The rhymes and choosing of words showed the painful world you tried to pass on. A very dramatic ending - "The End". Liked the idea and the unique way of writing 5/5 |