This is good xxx

This is amazing!! it is beautiful and flowing!!

This was beautiful. very heartfelt very expressive. the emotion you expressed was really touching.

Crying over the sudden realization,
the lies that build up,
the forgotten,
the invisible

i liked that stanza the most. a perfect ending. so powerful. this was a wonderfully deep poem. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I am the invisible,
never seen,
never felt,
never heard.

*I like how you explain invisible and all of it's meanings. Nice way to start*

Hidden by a mask,
the truth held in,
nothing said,
nothing heard.

*I like how this stanza mirrors the first almost. Very clever*

Undecided on the truth,
hurt or happy?
Does it matter?
It all ends the same.

*I like the use of rhetorical questions. Nice*

A broken thought leads to another,
around in circles,
it will never stop,
and give a rest.

*I like how you write. It seems broken and incomplete, but it works*

Crying over the sudden realization,
the lies that build up,
the forgotten,
the invisible.

*Wow..what a sad poem. I really enjoyed this. It was different. Nice work. Nik*