Comments : In the next life

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Thats so sad but kind alike how you said you were gunna put up a fight

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    Wow that was a great poem, i like got really interested in it it and didnt want it to end lol great job ! 5/5 =]

  • Great job on this dustin.i am still cruious bout what the creature was cause if it is something i am thinkin bout then..anyway good job!
    **lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Good job.i am curious bout the creature.5/5