Oh, thats powerful, well done its great work xxx

Tis another great poem jenna, like the narrative background, the flow is perfect and so is the grammer, another 5/5!!!! glad to see u writing!!!

Jenna, this is a fantastically mature write. But I assure you you don't need to explain yourself at the end! That just takes away any ambiguity that the clever readers will use to find something personal in it, so it's something to be shared rather than just YOUR journey.

Very well done!