by Hidden1 Mar 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Will I ever come out of hiding? |
by The Queen
The poem showed sad feeling and it was expressed genuinely that makes it a good read..However, i will suggest if you'll consider putting it up into stanzas and use some punctuations..I liked the words used and the emotions behind the poem so i'll give it a 5/5.. |