The Originality Taste.

by Teria   Mar 28, 2008


You can't see the beauty through this human waste,
and you can't feel the peace in the originality taste.
There's tears that will fall, droplets to scorch,
times where the wasted will carry the torch.
I wake up and think dreams are real,
and I hope and I pray -
that there's tears that will fall, droplets to scorch,
times where the wasted will carry the torch -
but for all the right reasons, that no one can see.
I pray this for all since there's no originality.
We need more in life than wh-r-es and transvestites,
and more than the cruelty that fills our delights.
For, you can't see the beauty through this human waste,
but maybe with some changes we can give originality a taste.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Uh, hmm. The flow in this piece was a bit rocky here and there. And the repitition of
    "There's tears that will fall, droplets to scorch,
    times where the wasted will carry the torch." kind of threw me off while I was reading. .

    "We need more in life than wh-r-es and transvestites,
    and more than the cruelty that fills our delights"

    those two lines had a lot of truth in it and i completely agree. anyway. twas a good write. :]