My Ghost

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 28, 2008


A beautiful florescent/transparent white,
Elegant, yet improper in its ways,
Brilliantly glowing as it moves at night,
Leaving all of it's admirers in a daze,

Spectacular blue eyes create a cold stare,
Keeping you trapped in it's cold dead illusion,
At any given moment it shows a fiery glare,
Burning you before you're aware of the intrusion,

Alone, it wanders around aimlessly,
Introducing death, as it's only friend,
Singing everyone to sleep shamelessly,
Comforting them, to meet their end,

It tears worlds apart with it's dis-location,
Never meant to be a part of this world,
But it's created a path using temptation,
Pulling the strings of fate until it unfurled,

It's not evil, just bored out of it's mind,
Finding amusement in the destruction of humanity,
All I ever wanted, was someone to be kind,
And save my sadistic ghost from insanity...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan

    You have an amazing talent

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Niiiiiice deskriptions ! O_o"
    i realli like the way you imagine things

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Ttis one has all the elments of a masterpiece it has metaphoric imagery with a poetic deep self knowledge

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    To be honest, this is interest for me to read and to see your ghost as i like the title and you write it in nicely way and flow as well.
    i love the pictures you paint in each stanza and i love how you make the death as a frind ,by the way i love this way to creat something new well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    I like it. Honestly I can't see its message..but after reading it 3 times, holla! yeah I got the picture, well..its been a great topic, the words you used were great and it fits on whole concept..actually I can't choose any touchy lines, but I like the whole stuff. The rhymes, hmm...yeah! its kinda shaky but it was superb!

    Good job,
    Keep on writing!
    5 for me!

    Veamm

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