Your language use is just amazing, well done x

I really like this piece. The topic that you wrote about is original and the whole poem's truly unique. The flow that you created is great, except in the second stanza, where you repeated the word "cold" in the first and in the second line which desturbed it. You can maybe change the second one with the word "frigid".
Overall, I like the imagery a lot. Your descriptions are very vivid and I could clearly imagine every stanza unfolding in front of me.
Your choice of words is very good, too along with fantastic atmosphere that keeps the reader attached to this piece from the first to the last line.
My favorite stanza is:

- A beautiful florescent/transparent white,
Elegant, yet improper in its ways,
Brilliantly glowing as it moves at night,
Leaving all of it's admirers in a daze,-
^^
Very effective description and great opening stanza.
I like the ending, too, it rounds up the whole poem nicely. You should maybe remove the comma from the last line, I think that it would sound more effective without that pause in the middle of it.
All in all, greatly done.
5/5 from me

Excellent!

I like it. Honestly I can't see its message..but after reading it 3 times, holla! yeah I got the picture, well..its been a great topic, the words you used were great and it fits on whole concept..actually I can't choose any touchy lines, but I like the whole stuff. The rhymes, hmm...yeah! its kinda shaky but it was superb!

Good job,
Keep on writing!
5 for me!

Veamm

To be honest, this is interest for me to read and to see your ghost as i like the title and you write it in nicely way and flow as well.
i love the pictures you paint in each stanza and i love how you make the death as a frind ,by the way i love this way to creat something new well done 5/5

Ttis one has all the elments of a masterpiece it has metaphoric imagery with a poetic deep self knowledge

Niiiiiice deskriptions ! O_o"
i realli like the way you imagine things

You have an amazing talent