by Ike Dizzle
It's not your best work because it seemed kinda forced lol. I read better but it was good for the most part |
by Hidden1
This is an excellent poem and the title is well suited. I like how you make her insecurities to be perfect and that just builds up her confidence and self-esteem. I like the sacrifices that you two would make for each other to make sure the other is happy. I love this poem and I appreciate the fact that you have found love. |
by Tom Swart
My kind of love poem - good write and a good feel as i read it. I liked that it wasn't too long or drawn out like some others I read. look forward to more |
by RB
Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous. now thats true love right there. thoroughly enjoyable read. you're very lucky because not many will come across these feelings let alone come across such strong feelings. very simple yet bold at the same time. everything was perfect and the person who this was written for is very lucky as well. 5/5 again! |