Very straight forward, but powerful and raw too.keep it up

Very bad, very sad, hope it is not about you.....

5/5

Very simple
but at the same time just as deep
5/5 <33

It's definately amazing and powerful. I can relate to it, and feel it. I love it. Keep up the amazing work.

You should read more of my poetry,
i would never hit you i would never abuse you,
though how made you cry though how hert you i would let die the are not wourlth your presios life o will be hear i will watch over you i will be your angel if you let me...

You should read more of my poetry,
i would never hit you i would never abuse you,
though how made you cry though how hert you i would let die the are not wourlth your presios life o will be hear i will watch over you i will be your angel if you let me...

Just hate me hit me

take me and break me

abuse me and abandon me

leave me and walk away
love this repeated line
give the poem a unique flow

Sad but nice :( and kinda pesimistic.but i liked

This is one of the best poems i have read in a while amazing xx

Hi,
i have to say
i looove this poem!
keep up the good work!
and thnx for readin mines :)

-Lady in Pain-

Aww thats so sad!
felt every bit of emotion!!
xo

Loved it all the way. Reminds me of me. Though it is sad it is true.

This is a really good poem.
I feel that way sometimes.
Thankyou for all the comments you left on mine. :]

This is a great poem. so sad...

Wow this poem is so sad.=)

LOVE IT..

I can see the emotions here, i hope you did not do anything bad , so you want all that to happen ,

i like it though

So harsh, so cruel, so cold. It flows beautifully though. I can connect to this poem and to be honest I have felt this way often myself. I look foreward to reading more...

Cool going on my favs

Wow it is a great poem because i just have the same feeilng that you have.keep up5\5