Awwwww that was so good keep up the good work...........

:(( sad but so awesome!! Beautifully written pink princess!

Really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like the last stanza!!!!

It's really sad but its done very well...it really gets the emotion in there...it describes how ive been feelin for a while... o btw thanks for commenting on my stuff

I really like this one!! ive been feeling so low lately and this one explains exactly what i want!

OMG!!!! I love this poem soooo much.... if this is true I hate that you feel this way. You deserve so much more and your worth is priceless. I just wish I could be there to love you through all your hurts and pains as a big sister. This is very emotional and so heartfelt. I felt like some of the things you have felt at one point in time. Know who you are as a woman and an individual. This saddens me that you feel this way.

Damn
i liked
nice work

Its pretty much the story of my life summed up in one poem.
You should consider being a lyricist.
Love it <3

Peace.

Wow. This poem hit hard. It was amazing. The point was so obviously heartbreakingly made. Nicely done.

Hun this is amazing, like pretty much all ur other writes! but really, this was sad, and nobody deserves to feel that way though. But all and all, nice write. xx

It a good poem!!!!!! go girlie!!!!!! but its so sad!!!!!! good job:-)!!!!

We should never feel like this but I can relate. 5/5, Em