I loved this poem.
just the words and how its set up!
it was great
keep up the good work!

I dont really get the poem that much.
i understand the guy is gone and the girl feels empty without him. and that nothing is complete without him. but i feel as thought something is missing.

the rhyming is all off, unless you weren't even trying to rhyme at all.

i'm not sure but it is just not what i thought it would be. but it does have meaning behind it so i give it a 3/5.

I think this poem needs a little work with the flow, i found it a bit hard to read in some places. but the feeling and emotion are good. :-)
4/5

-Syn

A breath taking passionate poem

Pain comes with ones own understanding of love. with no pain there can be no love, with no love there can be no pain and the circle goes on. I agree it was a little rough but the emotion showed through and with polish may shine even better.keep the pens ink from drying, peace