Lost With Time

Interesting piece, originally started, but I think that you ruined it's essence a little cause you rhymed and you could, for example, use much stronger and more descriptive word than-fine- but you rhymed mine and fine and with that forced rhyming your poem lost something of it's beauty, this is of course just my opinion and I don't want to offend you.
It is a bit cliche but I must admit you expressed a lot of emotions with this simple, short poem which is great.

"We haven't lost interest,
We're just lost with time."

<33 It's really surprising how you made a poem that is really short,but still amazing!

Love your poem .. touched me, moved me .. simple yet the feeling is there .. for a 15 year old guy to make a poem like this, you're one helluva kind .. brilliant! :)

Excellent!

Great write, It was short..but you had really express your thoughts and your message as well. It was simple and unique for me!

keep on writing,

Veamm

It is soo cute!! Hehe.. I like the last two lines! We all have good times and moments! We're just losing the time!! =]