Comments : Blade

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    A clear message in this poem.. A sad one, but still, a clear one. Maybe work more on your grammar next time..
    I must say I have felt this way before also. Great way of expressing it.

    Good luck,

    Greta xx

  • 16 years ago

    by silent screams

    Well written sweetie. 5/5