My Precious

by Jen   Mar 29, 2008


He is much more valuable than diamonds
And much more expensive than jewelries

His love to me is like gold
It will never get old

His lips are red like rubies
And his eyes shine like the stars

He is stunning like a prince
And he is incredible

Everything about him is elegant,
Attractive and magnificent

He is my fortune
And he is my treasure

He is priceless
And luxurious

I could not afford to lose him
He is worth more than any gems

He is my beloved precious
And he will always be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jeanette

    I liked this poem alot, especially these lines,
    "His lips are red like rubies
    And his eyes shine like the stars"

    What a wonderful piece of work![[=
    Keep up the good work, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Honey you dont suck at all this is a very good poem and as long as you capture the emotion i think the writing will speak for itself. I actually really enjoyed this poem but for some reason it feels like you'r eholding something back...maybe im wrong but its still a great poem nonetheless and not many people can do that. Kudos ^_-

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