by Quietly Versed Mar 29, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
I, too, am heir to blunder. |
by Syn
The emotion is there, but a few parts need a little perk, perhaps you should revise it. |
by kelly tavern
Hi, This poem I didnt quite know what to make of I think the words were off for me, but still there was something strangely good about it at the same time. The use of metaphors was good 4/5 |