Ingrid
Good job on the challenge poem. You hasve captured a womans wants very well.

The true love and devotion of a man is what it takes to make a woman's heart happy.
For what she truly needs is to be held by his loving arms when she falls asleep.
To be comforted by them when she is scared or worried.

These lines touched my heart.
Good job!
Love Cindy

I agree with you. You expressed it very well. I love this poem. Great job.

Pretty good poem bt I must disagree with your poem just a bit. A new born child (her child) can bring the joy, love, song to her heart also. But besides that it was a very good job.

Sweet and beautiful....I like the way Ingrid questions what value to set on true love....then proceeds to answer in the following lines:

"The most powerful of emotions in this world, the love shared between a man and a woman is the only thing that could ever really make her heart sing."

Thanks for the entry Ingrid!