by Baby Rainbow
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by Nix
O.k, interesting poem, unusual subject and you expressed emotions on truly strong way. It is little too cleat and simple for my taste, I think that it would sound better with some metaphors and unique expressions but overall nicely written. |
Wow...i can relate to this |
by Blissful
I'm sure this was hard to write because the emotions are so deep and so real that I could feel them throughout your piece. Well done. *5/5* |