Wow i loved this poem....so much beauty in it. great job. I also loved these lines..

You were the one i could trust
with my heart.
i knew that you were the one
that my heart would be safe with.
you entered my heart and now
i see the world in a new way.
you change my life oh.
now i want to say thank you.
for kepping my heat safe
under your wings.

but you have a spelling error..its keeping not kepping okay? but back to the poem, great job i gave you a 4/5 ^_^

I loved it, nice flow. 5/5

Wow very good poem and lmao thank you for the note lol i had to read it over but with like music playing so i read how it was written to be read and its wonderful