Comments : The Blade

  • 16 years ago

    by writeXlovexonxherXarms

    Thanksss for the comment :]
    but this one is really deep
    i love it.
    and i like the rym to it
    gooddd jobbb<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Kylie

    This one is good. I especially liked this part:

    "Your worried about me now,
    But you didn't worry when you were putting me down."

    It really made me think. And most people are like that; they only care when they think they need to or feel obligated to or whatever. Anyways, good work.