Wow...
I am impressed. This is one of the best poems in 'life' category I've read in a while. I like the topic and your flawless, vivid descriptions. The fact that you managed to say so much within just three short stanzas is remarkable. Truly unique poem, filled with excellently expressed emotions. I like the imagery in each individual stanza a lot. Fantastic piece, very profound.
You have a way with words.

The tittle caught my eye, nice poem... love the words and the way you refered to some things by other words... the ending is perfect, just enough to take my breath away.... great poem, really nice!