The pain you caused

by Monica93   Mar 30, 2008


I hope you know the pain you caused for me
all the memories that haunt my dreams
the screams that take over my mind
the tears i cant stop from pouring
scars that will always be there
no matter how much i wish they werent

Telling me i made it all up
that it is all in my mind
but i know the truth and so do you
no matter how much you refuse
it was real and i wont forget the pain
the pain and rage that is within

So tonight i will end this fight
the fight within myself
i will put it to an end
there will be one bullet that is all
who it will touch i cant recall
it might be you or it might be me
but one way or another i will be out of my misery

* yeah so i couldnt get the words right and it is a little rough but tell me what you think*

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    Its very good, your words are blunt which puts just plan out strong emotion into ur poem, well done! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    I think its real and as you write how you feel ,it will be good and every time you try you will be better,i enjoy readind,well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think its good, well done x