The flow in this one was OK. It's very well-written and has a nice concept. The word usage here was excellent! Very nice write! 5/5

Wow! Amazingly written, you captured my attention with first line and honestly kept it through whole poem, I admire your way to express such strong emotions which you obliviously can. Truly, truly creative and refreshing poem, I enjoyed in it's depth and I simply think that you expressed your passion on so innovate, fascinating way.