by Beautiful Forever Mar 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is a girl who never knew how to smile, |
by Unamed
You did an awsum job on this!..i totaly love the emotion u put into it....it almost made me cry. |
by Blackstar
Great Poem!! |
Wow, very explicit. Make sure to edit the very next to last line of poem. It has type o but no big deal. Um, where to start? Oh yes, aabb ccdd eeff gghh iijj kkll rhyme pattern was subtle and did not leave me frustrated like many often do. The poem does what it is suppose to as an explicit poem. Definitely able to imagine the whole scene. |