I like it alot!!.it was really sad..i gave it a 5/f because i liked it so much...
but here is a suggestion on the third line of the second stanze "fatigue" should be "fatigued"
on the 5th line of the second stanze ..weep and cry are basically the same thing,, why don't u say grieve and cry, or mourn and cry....
idk..just some suggestions....
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This is very moving
I really liked it a lot

I like this poem a lot, your good!

I thought that this was very good. Very deep and heartfelt. I loved the 1st and 3rd stanza. I thought that those were the best. 5/5

I love it
its true
jus because someone acts happy in front of people doesnt mean they arent sad and depresed
5/5
great job
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