by East Poetry May 23, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I sense your presence near to me, yet I seem to be alone, |
by Lexie Lou
The fact that you were able to lead it to a nightmare at the very end just makes this poem just.. amazing beyond words. I know I'm new ish to the poem making process, but this is one of those poems that instantly touches a person. Either they get tears in their eyes or just speechless, it came out so wonderfully and I love it |
by East Poetry
thanks lexie, that means a lot to me. I'm really glad you liked it. Was this the first poem I wrote here. i believe its one of, if not the first. Glad your digging deep into my poems. You rock! |
by mistake
Enjoyed most of the rhythm, the journey of this was very well told. |
Wow..brought tears to my eyes. This one is deep. Your eloquence of words is astonishing. |
by Xanthe
At first glance, it seems so long and boring that I almost skipped this. I'm really glad I didn't. Perhaps play with the layout/format to make it 'visually' look good and not boring? I usually skip really long poems here lol. So my advice: think of the format. |
by Mello193
This was almost scary at first. but then you awoke. great imagery. really like this. although the spacing is a little hard to comprehend. this was really awesome. |