At first glance, it seems so long and boring that I almost skipped this. I'm really glad I didn't. Perhaps play with the layout/format to make it 'visually' look good and not boring? I usually skip really long poems here lol. So my advice: think of the format.
The title should be: An Angel's Touch
Punctuation is important. Especially with the title, because wrong punctuation/spelling in the title would undermine the actual poem.
The flow was just smooth and the transition of events and tone was well executed. The rhymes were also a nice touch. Well done :)
-X

Wow..brought tears to my eyes. This one is deep. Your eloquence of words is astonishing.

Enjoyed most of the rhythm, the journey of this was very well told.

I believe your rhyming scheme would be better switching care for fear, and some different sentence not ending in tangle as it doesn’t rhyme with angel(although the sentence with tangle had deep feeling in it)

All in all an enjoyable read

The fact that you were able to lead it to a nightmare at the very end just makes this poem just.. amazing beyond words. I know I'm new ish to the poem making process, but this is one of those poems that instantly touches a person. Either they get tears in their eyes or just speechless, it came out so wonderfully and I love it