No More Smiles

Never did she hide her life before
Or cry herself to sleep at night
She was that girl who always smiled
But then she gave up on this fight. .

- It feels to me like you are writing about me, so i can feel all the feelings that you are writing about.

She doesn't deserve the pain and suffrage she's endured
Her soul aches with discontent and heartbreak
Nowadays, tears uncontrollably flood her sweet, angelic face
And she's become the girl who's always fake. .

- Exactly how I feel. Like it's no longer me, i have masked myself and become someone else!

Her seemingly high self esteem has hit rock bottom
Her self confidence has dwindled into emptiness
She feels as though she's left with nothing, with no one
For her life's been overcome by unfair loneliness. .

-Simply amazing!

She lives through each day, all broken up inside
And with her pain and strife, she refuses to impart
The happiness inside her has decayed long ago
And her smile perished with the sorrow that plunged into her heart. .

- Just another amazing poem by you I would say. I have added you to the list of my favourite poets! You have an amazing talent, don't ever stop writing!

It's good..

I think this is as awesome poem; I love the words, and the simple way it was written. I especially like the story you have portrayed. And again, I think you're an excellent writer......... I dont understand why people would give yu less than 5......

I think this is as awesome poem; I love the words, and the simple way it was written. I especially like the story you have portrayed. And again, I think you're an excellent writer......... I dont understand why people would give yu less than 5......

Wow simply amazing. Wether you liked it or not i loved it. Another great one from you!

Take care and keep writing.
~Jo Anna EL