Inspired By The Nonexistent

by Brittany C   Mar 30, 2008


Inspired by your nonexistent truth.
You lied so many times,
about so many things.
It hurts to think that I ever believed you.
Your lies inspired me to leave you forever.

Inspired by your nonexistent love.
Why did you say that you loved me?
When you never truly gave a damn.
Never once did you care about me.
You showing no love inspired me to go.

Inspired by your nonexistent faithfulness.
I now leave you to your pathetic self.
So that I will be free to seek true love.
You are far to conceded for my taste.
Pathetic is what you are get over yourself.

I cant believe that I was ever so blind,
all of the effort I put into loving you.
Was such an unnecessary waist of time.
We are over done with through.
Thats all there is to it I'm going out the door.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem. really heart felt. I could feel as though you lived through those words when you were writing them.

    I would like to make one suggestion. Every line in the beginning of each stanza except for the last one begins with "Inspired by your nonexistent *Insert word here*" I think that you should do that again. perhaps

    Inspired by your nonexistent kindness or compasion or promises. I think that would improve the poem a lot.

    Very well done other than that. There are some flow problems, nothing to worry about again, just little minor things that are off key.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was good, i liked it, it flowed well i think and you did a good job with the wording and imagery.
    love Tara-Kay

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