This was good, i liked it, it flowed well i think and you did a good job with the wording and imagery.
love Tara-Kay

Good poem. really heart felt. I could feel as though you lived through those words when you were writing them.

I would like to make one suggestion. Every line in the beginning of each stanza except for the last one begins with "Inspired by your nonexistent *Insert word here*" I think that you should do that again. perhaps

Inspired by your nonexistent kindness or compasion or promises. I think that would improve the poem a lot.

Very well done other than that. There are some flow problems, nothing to worry about again, just little minor things that are off key.

5/5