Brilliant poem, i can relate. 5/5

Once again, I'm not a non-rhyming poem fan, and this piece I though wasn't as good as the other one, but the last two stanzas made it better than the first poem (sorry if that sentence seems long and complicated). Obviously I liked the last two stanzas because they rhymed, and flowed well.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my poem 'When 2nd version'.

Very good job
;) lesthat